My phone broken

My phone broken 1. Who was/were involved in the story? - Myself and my mom were involved in the story. 2. What happened? How did it happen ? - My mobile phone dropped to the floor. 3. When did the story happen? - The Last Sunday. 4. Where did the story happen? - At Racing Drag in Suphanburi. 5. How did the story end? - I went to the cell phone repair shop to ask for the price of fixing. The price was 3,200 baht so I would like to fix by my saving money. My phone broken On Sunday morning, I woke up early because I was going to go to Racing Drag in Suphanburi. My aunt, mom, and I were in the car. I lay down my mobile phone on the backpack. Then, I fell asleep until to the destination. I picked my backpack. Suddenly, my mobile phone dropped to the floor. And my mom asked that “How is your mobile phone?” I saw my mobile phone broken; I was shocked I hid it in my shirt. I didn’t tell my mom because I wanted to save money for fix it. I was so nervousness. I went to the cell phone repair shop to ask for the price of fixing. The price was 3,200 baht so I would like to fix by my saving money.

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  1. Piyathida Sriieam15 พฤศจิกายน 2560 เวลา 03:24

    I like your writing because arranging writing is easy to understand. From your writing, If I were you I would do as you too. I give you 8/10 !!!!!!

    Good luck girl xoxo

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  2. BeerT.15 พฤศจิกายน 2560 เวลา 07:35

    I'm so sorry about your phone. Your story are easy to read and understand.I give you 8 points.
    P.s. I like your blog. It is beautiful blog and make me feel fresh.

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  3. Passarawadee16 พฤศจิกายน 2560 เวลา 00:33

    The content so good and easy to understand. Score is 9.

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  4. Sutatip16 พฤศจิกายน 2560 เวลา 02:25

    ความคิดเห็นนี้ถูกผู้เขียนลบ

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  5. Sutatip16 พฤศจิกายน 2560 เวลา 03:30

    Your writing are good and understand to read. I give you 8/10

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