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I saw fish in the marsh. I heard a sound of birds and trees I smelled the fresh air and fragrance of cupcakes I think the tasted of cupcakes delicious because it my eat of is mells good. I touched by the cool wheather. Every morning. I'm jogging in the park. It's localed in Chiang Mai. It's near the Ping river.There are a lot of trees. There is Cupcake Shop.I smelled the fresh air and fragrance of cupcakes. I think the tasted of cupcakes delicious because it my eat of is mells good. A little boy sitting and listenning to music under the tree. Meanwhile, I saw fish in the marsh. It's very quiet there; the only thing I heard a sound of birds and trees. In addition, I touched by the cool wheather.So, this is theI touched by the cool wheather. for me.

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  1. Piyathida Sriieam15 พฤศจิกายน 2560 เวลา 04:04

    Great! your writing is nice and your drawing is very cute. I love it. Your contents are too short, you should add more detail that can explain your idea. I give you 8/10

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  2. BeerT.15 พฤศจิกายน 2560 เวลา 07:44

    Good job Nattha! Your photo is cute but you should add more some detail. I want to go Chiang Mai. I give you 8 points.

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  3. Sutatip15 พฤศจิกายน 2560 เวลา 07:44

    Your writing is good. But your drawing is very be flat,you should paint pictures. I give you 8/10

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  4. Passarawadee16 พฤศจิกายน 2560 เวลา 00:23

    Your paragraph and picture is very nice. I give you 9 points.

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