My sister and mom
This is a picture is smart women and cute little girl. They are my family. In picture, They're sitting at home.
My mom her name is Kara. She is an attractive women. She is smart, pretty and kindly person of 40 year. She is a tall women who has a slim figure . Her hair is long brown and wavy. She has a fair complexion with big blue eyes, just a few laugh lines around her eyes. She smiles a lot so her face always looks happy. She is one of the kindest people. She always wears casual clothes- shirts and blue jeans. Many person thinks my mom is a good-looking women.
My sister her name is Mari. Mari is a small girl who has rosy cheeks of 12 years. She has twinkling blue eyes. She smiles a lot. Her hair is long brown and straight. She like to dress neatly. She like to played basketball and enjoyed listen to music. She is beautiful person. Although she is so intelligent, obtimistic, gentle, and creative. They are discouraged, and everything for me.
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